His friend wrote a poem and he replied back to it in the language he best knew . over to you //
FRIEND`S POEM
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Standing at your door !! Please open my dear !!
Though i stand at your door
i dont knock out of a little fear
It has been a long year
and i have been learning to keep this far
wishes once so demanding like a chilled opened beer
aging into wine getting smoother and smoother
the distace has vanished and my crazy cravings disappear
and i dont miss you that much any more.
for i have created a smiling you out of my little memoir
and my obsessions, in a weird rhythmic way i got over
The eye is not that playful any more
it's become steady and getting deeper.
I have grown a hairy beard and cut short my hair
and many times find you behind the mirror
I still stand like i used to at your door
though turned silent and dont knock out of a little fear.
but i dont know who you would like to meet an old friend or a stranger
and i have turned silent and dont knock out of a little fear.
Peep through the spying lens of the door
If you still find a friend plaese open my dear !!!
MY REPLY
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The protagonist, behind closed doors...
I stare at the door,
feel the emptiness within;
I see it with a little tear,
making inroads through my skin
It`s been a long year
Why does he not drop by?
I am not sure,
Why doesn`t he knock and say 'hi'?
Wishes, once like a child,
waiting to be born
my cravings have become numb
and my heart is torn
I miss you a lot dear,
I`ll think of you till eternity
Let me revel,
in the pages of serenity
I ain`t myself anymore
how can i be?
thoughts though silent
I am just not me
Peep in my heart and listen to it beat
I am there near the door.
Please don`t fear;
If you still want a friend please knock,my dear
12 January 2008 at 10:52 pm
brilliant!
13 January 2008 at 1:27 am
thanks , my bro will be happy to see this . bhai naam roshan karr raha hai :P
30 January 2008 at 12:28 pm
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30 January 2008 at 12:30 pm
VOILA!!! ... or rather AAILA!!!..or rather as a freak would say JAMAAILA!!!;
What do we have here? I love you dude. Glad you liked it.